Positive: I think that the way you presented your ideas for space change here at WCU is smart, your idea of a circular classroom and a bigger connection within upperclassmen and underclassmen could be crucial to the learning of students. I like how you incorporated pictures of exactly what you think should change here at West Chester and how you incorporated Freire’s idea of space into our own university.
Negative: One thing that needs to be fixed in your paper is some of the grammatical and spelling errors, there were some spots in the essay where I found incomplete sentences that were missing a word or so (1st paragraph.) I also believe that Freire’s ideas should be more incorporated in your paper, maybe some more quotes?
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