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Comments on: Topic Proposal
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WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall CreamWed, 25 Sep 2019 23:29:03 +0000
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By: Jake Drap
https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/topic-proposal-6/#comment-1067
Wed, 25 Sep 2019 23:29:03 +0000https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=5125#comment-1067Tim, I think you have an outstanding thesis. It really makes a great point, and I believe you will be able to go through a lot with it. I agree completely on your idea of a more circular environment. Students should be able to see each other’s facial expressions and be able to communicate in class discussions much easier. Your first quote is quite relative to education in that it is more teacher driven rather than student. Your second quote is also great towards your thesis. I would try to narrow down your thesis to be able to make a stronger statement rather than an introduction. Other than that, looks to be in good shape.
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By: Mackenzie Neiderer
https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/topic-proposal-6/#comment-1055
Wed, 25 Sep 2019 15:55:48 +0000https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=5125#comment-1055Peer review Jenna and Kenzie
positive: with agree with how the classroom set up should change.
negative: Your thesis isn’t narrow enough, and some details sound more like an introduction paragraph.
Kenzie: Your ideas are good, you should use visuals in your paper
Jenna: You have good supporting quotes.
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By: Tyler Evans
https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/topic-proposal-6/#comment-1044
Tue, 24 Sep 2019 23:12:53 +0000https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=5125#comment-1044I like the ideas you presented in the thesis, it would probably be a good idea to include a few more specific details and possibly some photos or diagrams in your final piece of work. I also think that both of your quotes are strong evidence for your thesis and will tie into your paper nicely.
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