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Comments on: Draft 1
https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/updated-draft/
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By: Katherine Sola
https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/updated-draft/#comment-1238
Sun, 10 Nov 2019 23:54:29 +0000https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=6336#comment-1238Positive: great start
Negative: Thesis is long
Great job incorporating Percy
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By: Leann Carroll
https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/updated-draft/#comment-1236
Sat, 09 Nov 2019 03:17:53 +0000https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=6336#comment-1236postive- very good at getting to the point
negative- more in depth with quotes
good use of Percy
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By: Samantha Weitzel
https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/updated-draft/#comment-1235
Fri, 08 Nov 2019 14:21:47 +0000https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=6336#comment-1235Percy: Great job using Percy in your topic sentence!
Positive: strong thesis!
Negative: Explain quotes a little bit more
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By: Laura McGroary
https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/updated-draft/#comment-1225
Wed, 06 Nov 2019 00:48:14 +0000https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=6336#comment-1225I think you have really good ideas and I think they work really well in you essay.
Your thesis might be a little wordy.
I like the quotes you chose from Percy and I think they explain your ideas really well.