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Comments on: Writing Draft https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-draft/ WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream Wed, 02 Oct 2019 15:38:10 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.3 By: Samuel Livorno https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-draft/#comment-1142 Wed, 02 Oct 2019 15:38:10 +0000 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=5293#comment-1142 Adam has an overall strong thesis that is going to propel his writing into something great. He describes the relationship between teachers and students, that teachers are the oppressors and the students are the oppressed. He describes that the teachers are at fault for falling into a routine of spouting information that can unfold into students being ill-prepared for exams. He then dives into how students continue this problem by believing they are left to do nothing, when they can have just as much power than the professors. Other than a few grammatical and sentence errors, Adams project seems to be on the right path to success.

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