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Comments on: Writing Project 1
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WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall CreamWed, 25 Sep 2019 14:13:17 +0000
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By: Jacob Heikkinen
https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-10/#comment-1051
Wed, 25 Sep 2019 14:13:17 +0000https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=4844#comment-1051Your thesis is on the right tracks but I think you could shorten it and at the same time more clearly state what exactly it is that would help students learn better and retain information. For example just state how you are going to change the classrooms instead of just saying it will help students feel equal to the professors. Other than that I think your link between your idea, the topic, and Freire’s ideas of learning are solid.
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By: Meghan Kidd
https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-10/#comment-1041
Tue, 24 Sep 2019 21:43:21 +0000https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=4844#comment-1041I think the thesis is entirely too long and is not truly presented. You have a good basis for your essay, but need to develop a more clear thesis and give an example of how the classrooms should be created. The quotes are very good picks and will help your essay strengthen your argument.
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