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Comments on: Writing project 1 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-16/ WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream Fri, 04 Oct 2019 00:56:49 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.2 By: Samantha Weitzel https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-16/#comment-1189 Fri, 04 Oct 2019 00:56:49 +0000 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=5308#comment-1189 Samantha Weitzel, Katherine Sola, Leann Carroll

Positive: We like your idea that there should be more ways for students and professors to interact to help students learn.

Positive: We liked how you used questions throughout the essay and then answered them giving more information.

Constructive criticism: The word you is used a lot making this paper second person which can then be harder to explain.

]]> By: Mackenzie Neiderer https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-16/#comment-1116 Mon, 30 Sep 2019 02:20:35 +0000 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=5308#comment-1116 peer review (Jenna and Kenzie)
Good- We like your idea of making classes interactive. We also like how you use questions to help with the flow and keeping the reader thinking throughout your essay.

Bad- Try to be more positive in your essay. This essay is supposed to be about how we can change West Chester not just what is is wrong with the university.

Jenna- Use more details in your paragraphs so the reader knows your thinking.

Kenzie- Come up with more ways for the professor to interact with the students.

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