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https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-draft-4/ WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream Thu, 03 Oct 2019 03:43:19 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.2 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-draft-4/#comment-1183 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 03:43:19 +0000 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=5318#comment-1183 You have strong quotes to support your ideas, and multiple good ideas. Maybe try separating the different points into paragraphs to help with the flow of things. Overall effective arguments that relate well to Freire’s ideas, but introduction and conclusion paragraphs would tie it together nicely.

]]> https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-draft-4/#comment-1170 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 01:33:02 +0000 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=5318#comment-1170 The use of the quote from Freire about transforming is a good connection to what you are trying to interpret. Do certain things really need to be removed from the course though? Explain how they would go about changing the curriculum.

]]> https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-draft-4/#comment-1143 Wed, 02 Oct 2019 15:40:16 +0000 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=5318#comment-1143 Reading Bella and Noah’s thesis, I felt that the problem, they are going to analyze, in their thesis is well loaded and the passage will back it up. However, I feel that their explain of their thesis is one sided. They talk about the professors inflicting problems on education but do not discuss the problems the students cause within the system. Throughout ,”The Banking Concept of Education” Freire discusses how both the students and teachers are at fault for the failure of the general education system. I feel that their explanation of their thesis needs have the perspective of the students, I feel it will make their project stronger.

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