Positive: We like how you gave a scenario of what class with 150 students should look like. We can all relate to how annoying lectures are! Relating Friers points to our first year experience class was a good idea too!

Negative: We think your first paragraph is going in the right direction, however, we think it would be a good idea to add another sentence between your two quotes so the paragraph flows better.

Other: We think it is good that you did relate to how a lecture should look by adding a breakout session like we do in FYE, however, it seams a little over the top. Some lectures have 150 students to 1 teacher and having 5-6 students in that many breakouts would be almost impossible especially with professors with more than one lecture. I think you should change the number of students to make it more practical or come up with a new way lectures could be changed according to Friers views.