Comments on: Writing Project 1 Draft

By: Kira Aves

Kira Aves — Thu, 03 Oct 2019 02:41:06 +0000

Your topic is good and you have valid arguments to support it. Maybe try adding more examples of how space can be utilized more efficiently (around North campus?) to benefit students that aren’t health science majors.

By: Luke Jarvis

Luke Jarvis — Wed, 02 Oct 2019 21:02:13 +0000

I thought you had a good idea of somehow bringing the two campuses together. I think you should talk about how this will help all students, not just health science majors. Also, I think you should talk more about how WCU would acquire the land, since when you say ” It would not be that much money, since it is all mostly homeowners” I was thinking that homeowners wouldn’t just give up their homes just for the school.

By: Julia DiGiorgio

Julia DiGiorgio — Wed, 02 Oct 2019 20:31:25 +0000

I really liked your topic and the way you explained your argument. Me being a health science major I agree 100% that the campus should not be separated. I just feel like In a way you should write why this wouldn’t be possible maybe. otherwise it was really well put together.

By: Timothy Domanowski

Timothy Domanowski — Tue, 01 Oct 2019 23:09:03 +0000

Nice topic a counter argument that could be used is that you can simply take the shuttle and that missing it is simply from poor time management skills and that the time the shuttle goes to south campus is basically when your time for class starts although it has not officially started. There for it is not needed.
Also Making more classes in between south and north campus would not change the fact that someone could have a class on north campus and another class on south campus.

By: Samantha Pawluczyk

Samantha Pawluczyk — Tue, 01 Oct 2019 16:46:00 +0000

This is a good topic and you presented some good arguments. In order to make your argument stronger, adding more examples to your essay would help. For example, talk more about something that can apply to more students rather than just heath science majors.