By: Noah Heslop

Noah Heslop — Thu, 03 Oct 2019 01:08:09 +0000

we think that some of your ideas are wonderful like the plan to have an academic study floor for each building. This kind of exists already with floor lounges and lobbies at the bottom of most of the residential buildings on campus. If they were to do this, we were slightly concerned about where the university would house students because most buildings are at maximum capacity as it is. In order to make this addition, it would take a lot of time and money in order to add an additional floor onto each building. On top of that, converting university hall into a library would only benefit half of the student population because students who live in Goshen and Tyson will have to walk just as far to access this facility and the university would also have to hire a second set of staff members to maintain it. Even with opening a library closer to the dorms, i doubt the university would allow it to be open 24/7 so it would be more beneficial to invest in an online database where students can access materials from the comfort of their rooms and when it is convenient for them.

By: Donald Lessing

Donald Lessing — Thu, 03 Oct 2019 00:47:49 +0000

1. My group members and I were very Intrigued by the hand drawn pictures that you included with your essay. The drawings give the readers a much more clear visual of what you are trying to get across in the written portion.
2. My group members and I only have one concern with your figure 2, University hall also houses students, how can you change that to still make all of this work?
3. My group member and I agreed heavily with moving the library closer if possible, having it closer and much easier to access will definitely motivate students to take advantage of it much more.

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By: Noah Heslop

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