Positive: I like your ideas and I think your second quote really works with your essay.
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Constructive Criticism: We feel that you have the right idea with both of your quotes, but they don’t seem to be the best quotes to use going along with your thesis.
Positive: We also agree with you that the student to teacher relationship is strongly affected based on the size of the classroom and the number of students.
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Positive: We also agree that West Chester does a great job separating the two.
Constructive Criticism: What is the problem that you are fixing with the space here at West Chester?
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