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Comments on: Writing Project 1 Topic 1 Draft: Riley, Leah, Gabby, and Amanda https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-topic-1-draft-riley-leah-gabby-and-amanda/ WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream Thu, 03 Oct 2019 00:35:49 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.2 By: Madison Barker https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-topic-1-draft-riley-leah-gabby-and-amanda/#comment-1161 Thu, 03 Oct 2019 00:35:49 +0000 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=5322#comment-1161 Positive: I like how you used figures and really analyzed and explained them.
Constructive: make sure when you’re connecting your ideas to Freire you don’t just quote him, go more into depth and analyze what he is saying and how it connects to your own ideas.

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By: Makayla Medycki https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-1-topic-1-draft-riley-leah-gabby-and-amanda/#comment-1149 Wed, 02 Oct 2019 17:10:45 +0000 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=5322#comment-1149 Positive:
-Makayla: I like how you included the pictures because it helped back up your point!
-Gwen: I think your draft is very good because you back up each point you make with evidence and it shows that you really know what your talking about
-Maura: I like the idea of using the classrooms in the dorms, and how you connected it to Freire.
Constructive: Make sure to add the page number to the quote in your first paragraph.

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