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Comments on: Writing project #2 draft 1 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-2-draft-1/ WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream Wed, 06 Nov 2019 14:59:32 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.5.3 By: Mia Citerone https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/weekly-responses/writing-project-2-draft-1/#comment-1226 Wed, 06 Nov 2019 14:59:32 +0000 https://wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/?p=6257#comment-1226 (Mia)-I think your quotes reflect well on what you are trying to prove. in this case, taking classes beyond the major will help with the major.

(Mia)-I am pretty sure even though we are all reading from the same source it still has to be properly cited.

(Mia)-I think that this paragraph needs a little tweaking. The whole paragraph should be based around the last sentence because I think that is a strong point. Try to take out some of the more wordy repetitive sentences and replace them with stronger ones.

(Emily) this is a strong quote for this point, just make sure it is cited correctly.

(Emily)- your first two points are valid and relevant to your topic.

(Emily) – overall, I think you are on the right track. There are just some grammatical errors that can be easily fixed.

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