Comments on: Writing Topic 2

By: Kira Aves

Kira Aves — Thu, 03 Oct 2019 02:16:01 +0000

I think your idea for developing an app is creative and could be very beneficial to students. Maybe try adding some more quotes from Freire to help support your ideas, and elaborate a bit more on the benefits you think student teaching will provide.

By: Olivia Riley

Olivia Riley — Thu, 03 Oct 2019 01:37:42 +0000

In reply to Kyle Owens. I really like your idea of creating a app to help match students in that same major or classes. This could be something very useful as I myself have had a hard time meeting people to connect with in my classes. One thing I would suggest would to have a strong attention getter and fix up a few technical error's.

By: Kyle Owens

Kyle Owens — Tue, 01 Oct 2019 21:58:57 +0000

I thought your topic was very interesting. I would add a fact or statistic as an attention getter in the introduction paragraph. I would also recommend talking about how the school chooses to spend the money gained from tuition payments in more detail. You can also include more of the detail and benefits of student teaching. I thought the quote you chose was fitting. I would try to add a couple more quotes if possible.