Jake Drap, Tyler Evans, Cristian Galilea<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Praise: I think your thesis has a lot of good ideas and plenty of room to branch off of and write a powerful and persuasive paper.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Constructive: However I believe that if you included Percy’s ideas or just compare him to support your ideas in your thesis then it will be a lot more powerful and you will get your points across better.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Percy: I think the quotes that you do have support your thesis and i believe Percy would agree with your thesis. <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

Jake Drap, Tyler Evans, Cristian Galilea Praise: I think your thesis has a lot of good ideas and plenty of room to branch off of and write a powerful and persuasive paper. Constructive: However I believe that if you included Percy’s ideas or just compare him to support your ideas in your thesis then it … Continue reading “Topic Proposal Peer Review”<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":108,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[13],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-6053","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-weekly-responses"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6053","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/108"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=6053"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6053\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":6054,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6053\/revisions\/6054"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=6053"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=6053"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=6053"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}