David:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Praise: Your subtopics completely support your thesis
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Constructive: your paragraph format is just how you need it to get a good grade. Make sure you have no grammatical errors
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Percy: your quotes support the sub topics well. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Seamus:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Praise: I like your statement that field trips or visual learning can give you better learning
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Constructive: Maybe reference Percy or start with a question in the intro paragraph to make it stronger
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Percy: Your Percy quote supports your field trip solution well<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Haley:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Haley Clarke<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Praise: I agree with your statement that discussion panels are a great way for people to have an opinion<\/p>\n\n\n\n

constructive: your paper is well formatted but you might want to add a little more bulk to the last two paragraphs <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Percy: your knowledge from the readings of Percy showed greatly in your paragraphs when comparing Percy to your sub-topic<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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