Positive: I really like your ideas and overall I think they are good ways to teach without actually teaching.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Constructive: Maybe start your paragraph where you are explaining your subpoints, with exactly what you subpoints is, so readers don’t have to search for what each paragraph is about.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Percy: I liked the quotes you chose from Percy and they helped prove your ideas. I also like the quotes you chose from Freire too.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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