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I think this was a nice Percy quote for your topic, because when learning outside the classroom it is easier to obtain the lesson and learn. Whenever Im in class staring at a lecture i easily get distracted and the teachers point will not get across, but when Im active outside of school studying or doing extracurricular activities I pick up concepts better.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Constructive: I believe it would be beneficial to vary your vocabulary. For example, this paragraph contain the word ” you” multiple times. If this was changed, it would allow this portion of the essay to flow nicer, and create more of a rhythm in your tone.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Percy: I believe you clarified your Percy argument well. The way is was worded was straightforward and summarized it nicely.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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