Praise: Your thesis is strong, and the topics you express are strongly supported through out your body paragraphs. <\/p>\n\n\n\n

Constructive: Your quotes are decent but I feel like there could potentially be more well suited remarks from Percy to support your ideas better.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Percy: You do a very good job of linking your problems and then solutions to Percy and this makes it easier to basically agree and support your paper. <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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