Ethan Stein<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Constructive: You should add a introduction sentence in the beginning of your first paragraph. I think you should connect the problem with your thesis.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Percy: I believe that your connection with Percy’s ideas are very well develop in your paragraphs, the way you support them are very well explain.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Praise: So far I like how you are connecting your ideas with Percy’s ideas, you are using good examples from it.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

Ethan Stein Constructive: You should add a introduction sentence in the beginning of your first paragraph. I think you should connect the problem with your thesis. Percy: I believe that your connection with Percy’s ideas are very well develop in your paragraphs, the way you support them are very well explain. Praise: So far I … Continue reading “Review\/ Draft 1”<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":104,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[13],"tags":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6523"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/104"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=6523"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6523\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":6524,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6523\/revisions\/6524"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=6523"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=6523"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=6523"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}