1 Praise: I like the way you worded your intro. Starting off with a question helps engage readers to want to know what you\u2019re going to be writing about in your essay. You also have some solid ideas for your topic.<\/p>\n

1 Constructive: Try re-wording certain parts of your essay so it flows more easily.<\/p>\n

Use of Percy: Your overall use of Percy seems to support your points really well. This quote especially helps support your sub-point and you explained the context of it nicely.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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