Your  paper is clear and easy to understand. I like what you say: <\/strong>Having students teach other students allows for a better connection because there is no higher authority over the students. <\/em><\/strong>This is an excellent point. <\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

In your thesis, you mentioned a class that is not good, I wonder if you should contrast it with a class that is doing it better. You can play around with that a bit to see if it strengthens your thesis.\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n

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Your  paper is clear and easy to understand. I like what you say: Having students teach other students allows for a better connection because there is no higher authority over the students. This is an excellent point.  In your thesis, you mentioned a class that is not good, I wonder if you should contrast it … Continue reading “Amanda Jiang & Leah Schreffler – Long draft peer review”<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":138,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[13],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-6669","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-weekly-responses"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6669"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/138"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=6669"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6669\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":6670,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/6669\/revisions\/6670"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=6669"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=6669"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/wrt120.digitalwcu.org\/WeeklyBlogs\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=6669"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}