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Praise:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Makayla: The second and third paragraphs are super in depth and well understood by a reader.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Maura: The first body paragraph is super strong and really offers a lot to the rest of the essay.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Gwen: You have a super good connection between WCU and your claim consistently throughout the essay.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Constructive:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Makayla: Try to include Percy in your introduction.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Maura: It might be beneficial to try to add some more to the intro about the specifics of your claim.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Gwen: Maybe try to add more about Percy to the last paragraph and include some quotes.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Percy:<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Makayla: The connection to Percy in the third paragraph really helps connect the quote to your claim.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Maura: Add some more about Percy, especially quotes, to strengthen to connection to Percy.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

Gwen: This is good support to your quote and claim but it’s difficult to connect to Percy with just one mention of him.<\/p>\n\n\n\n

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