Project 2 Draft 2 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1N6ii1nkePINstzuxHXY8C-9miFGS7KkkL3bflU87i6k/edit Author: John Camperson 9:00 AM View all posts by John Camperson
2 thoughts on “Project 2 Draft 2”
positive: I really like your idea
constructive: try to make sentences flow better
quotes work well
Praise: great idea!! – One thing that all students should do to help maximize their learning outside the classroom is developing a daily reflection. This can be something that allows the student to plan their day out, write down their goals, and get their work done on time. This is important because students need to space out their time and make sure they have time for certain things.
Constructive: reword sentence. . Utilizing the sources on campus during free time is always a good thing that students can do as well.
Percy: quote works well with topic- In Percy’s “The Loss of the Creature” he explains how “a student may simply be strong enough, brave enough, clever enough to take the dogfish and the sonnet by storm, to wrest control of it from the educators and the educational package” (Percy 5).
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