Praise: The first paragraph is well written and gets the ideas across well, as well as the use of Percy.
Constructive: In the quotes add Percy and the page number in parentheses.
Percy: Good use of Percy and his beliefs on sovereignty.
WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream
Praise: The first paragraph is well written and gets the ideas across well, as well as the use of Percy.
Constructive: In the quotes add Percy and the page number in parentheses.
Percy: Good use of Percy and his beliefs on sovereignty.