Constructive: Wording is a little awkward, try and grab the reader’s attention right in the beginning
Positive: You have very strong points throughout your paper
Percy: Try to analyze Percy a little more and incorporate it into your subpoints
WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream
Constructive: Wording is a little awkward, try and grab the reader’s attention right in the beginning
Positive: You have very strong points throughout your paper
Percy: Try to analyze Percy a little more and incorporate it into your subpoints