Praise: Your intro is really good and I like how your quotes flow smoothly.
Constructive: Some grammatic errors
Percy: Some quotes do not say who they are from. Just add Percy’s name at the end of it. I like the quotes you chose.
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Praise: Your intro is really good and I like how your quotes flow smoothly.
Constructive: Some grammatic errors
Percy: Some quotes do not say who they are from. Just add Percy’s name at the end of it. I like the quotes you chose.