Praise: You have the ideas down which relate to the main topic you are trying to prove.
Construction: Check over your grammar to make sure the sentences read well.
Percy: Add some quotes to back up your points in the body paragraphs.
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Praise: You have the ideas down which relate to the main topic you are trying to prove.
Construction: Check over your grammar to make sure the sentences read well.
Percy: Add some quotes to back up your points in the body paragraphs.