Julia- Terrific start!
1 praise- I like what you say in your thesis: “There are other classes to take that open up students ideas giving them more knowledge and challenges to complete.” This is helpful to keep in mind, especially when we don’t prefer a class- looking to see what we can learn from it is a good practice to establish. It is also helpful to see how seemingly unrelated topics/classes actually do relate.
1 constructive- your first sub-point can be a little tricky to practically implement. I would make sure to give strong supporting ideas and application to go with that point.
Percy quote- The quotes are great! I think they go well with the two points you have.
