Constructive: Try to make transitions smoother in-between paragraphs.
Praise: You have really solid ideas and I like how you made your thesis really clear.
Percy: Work on better incorporating quotes into your paragraphs.
WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream
Constructive: Try to make transitions smoother in-between paragraphs.
Praise: You have really solid ideas and I like how you made your thesis really clear.
Percy: Work on better incorporating quotes into your paragraphs.