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Warning: Constant FS_CHMOD_FILE already defined in /home/digitalw/wrt120.digitalwcu.org/WeeklyBlogs/wp-config.php on line 101 Luke Jarvis Project 2 Proposal – Weekly Writing & Blogs
Pro: I like your thesis it has a lot of strong points
Neg: having your thesis so long doesn’t pack as hard as a punch as a short and straight to the point one
pro: Your quote is strong and relates to your thesis.
I like the main ideas you are focusing on in your essay and I think they are good solutions to the problems that Percy talks about.
I think the thesis you have is a good start, but maybe work on it to make it a little bit stronger.
I like the Percy quotes you chose and I think they will relate well to your ideas.
Pro: I like your thesis it has a lot of strong points
Neg: having your thesis so long doesn’t pack as hard as a punch as a short and straight to the point one
pro: Your quote is strong and relates to your thesis.
I like the main ideas you are focusing on in your essay and I think they are good solutions to the problems that Percy talks about.
I think the thesis you have is a good start, but maybe work on it to make it a little bit stronger.
I like the Percy quotes you chose and I think they will relate well to your ideas.