Dana Roeder
Positive: Once again, great way to apply the topic with an example that’s relatively universal to all students, or at the very least feasible to most students, shows correlation.
Negative: Maybe cut back a little on the quoting, also be sure to have the correct format on the final draft.
Use of Percy: Great work on incorporating Percy’s view at the start with your thesis.
Brandon Zahal, Chad Weldon, RJ Walther
Positive: While obvious, it’s good that you’ve mentioned the underlying issue in the first slide rather than mention Percy’s article.
Negative: In general I’d just add a little more to each slide, From how it looks it’s obviously not done but a few more key pieces here and there wouldn’t hurt.
Use of Percy: Wonderful quote to be applying towards the topic of education outside the classroom, hits home the idea that students regard themselves as learners rather than storage spaces for knowledge.
