PEER REVIEW 2: maddie barker
Praise:
Makayla – The support for the quotes is very descriptive and well done.
Maura – The connection between West Chester, the problem, the solution, and Percy is strong.
Gwen – The organization is really well done and helps strengthen the argument.
All – The supportive reasoning you used after each quote is super well done and very impressive! Great job!
Constructive:
Makayla – Be sure to stay in the same tense throughout a sentence.
Maura – Watch out for run-on sentences and be sure to capitalize where necessary.
Gwen – Try to use the strongest parts of quotes and work it into sentences.
Percy:
Makayla – Your first quote works really well with the idea you are arguing, but it is a very long sentence that might be able to be a little bit more pinpointed.
Maura – The explanation backing the quote in the second paragraph really supports the quote and connects Percy’s beliefs to your essay.
Gwen – In the fourth paragraph, the connection between Percy’s belief of avoiding the professor’s lecture based teaching really supports your argument that online platforms are a better way to learn.
