Praise: I agree with your sub points of how WCU should promote clubs in student’s specific major.
Constructive: I think your thesis could be fixed and become more clear because at first I was confused about what you were trying to say.
Use of Percy: The quotes are strong and can tie in well with your thesis. However, try to revise your thesis.
Leah:
Praise: I agree with your thesis that students should take different classes outside of their major to create a better understanding of different classes. I also like your subpoena of promoting clubs that are focused on specific majors.
Constructive: If students would choose the professor, how would the class change? The teacher would still teach the same concepts that the students are upset about.
Percy: Make sure to explain how each quote relates to the subpoenas. Some fo the quotes are hard to understand, jut make sure you explain them.
