Topic: Education Beyond the Major
Team: Myself
Thesis: Learning things outside of a specific major are very important. Education beyond the major helps students such as building necessary life skills, discovering how the student learns…
Supporting Ideas: “It is only the rarest student who knows that the sonnet must be salvaged from the package”(Percy 4)
“They have in common the stratagem of avoiding the educator’s direct presentation of the object as a lesson to be learned and restoring access to sonnet and dogfish as beings to be known, reasserting the sovereignty of knower over known”(Percy 5)
Positive- Great start
Negative- a thesis statement should be one sentence
Great Quote
positive- thesis relates good to topic
negative-explain more
quote-spectacular quote
Positive – Quote works well with topic
Negative – Necessary skills is a very general statement
Quote – Amazing quote