Education Beyond the Major
If a student at West Chester University is majoring in physics, then why should they have to take an art class. It would seem to be a waste of time, unless there is a justified reason. Students seem to moan at the thought of taking a class they don’t feel is necessary to their degree but in reality could help them in the long run. Walker Percy is an author who talks about these topics of education in his passage called The Loss of the Creature. Even though Percy never directly writes it down, he is pushing this message of education beyond a students major. West Chester is no exception. Most of the students time at West Chester University are spent outside their major because it helps them learn indirectly through mistakes and challenges them in ways they aren’t used to or familiar with.
There is a saying that in order to succeed in life you have to fail first. Humans learn from their mistakes than from their successes. A physics major might find math and sciences easy but when you give them a paint brush they might struggle. Percy says, “If the failures are “wrong” enough, as these are, they might still be turned to account as rueful conversation pieces”(3). This means that just because you fail doesn’t mean you are a failure. The art class is going to be a different type of hard for the physics major student and that will help them deal with situations like that for the future. Taking classes outside of the major prepares the student to not learn the material but know how to deal with situations they are not used too. At West Chester students need to take more classes to they are not used to to open them up to failure and from that failure come success and knowledge. Without these courses outside of the students major, the student might not be challenged enough to learn.
When a student is used a certain type of learning from the same subject and gets thrown into a new environment and type of teaching it can be challenges them in ways they aren’t used too and to learn. The content does not have to be hard. It can just be a different way of learning that is difficult. Percy says, “The great difficulty is that he is not aware that there is a difficulty”(4). This means that people should always expect and prepare for the worst but hope for the best. When that physics student walks into that art class with a bad attitude then they are going to end up with a bad grade. If someone thinks lightly of any class then they are going to be surprised with the difficulty level compared to if they prepared properly they would be fine. All students fall to this statement at some point in their educational career. Every student is not perfect in every subject and in every class. The reason to take classes outside of the major is to find those weaknesses and work/fix them.
(Mia)-I think your quotes reflect well on what you are trying to prove. in this case, taking classes beyond the major will help with the major.
(Mia)-I am pretty sure even though we are all reading from the same source it still has to be properly cited.
(Mia)-I think that this paragraph needs a little tweaking. The whole paragraph should be based around the last sentence because I think that is a strong point. Try to take out some of the more wordy repetitive sentences and replace them with stronger ones.
(Emily) this is a strong quote for this point, just make sure it is cited correctly.
(Emily)- your first two points are valid and relevant to your topic.
(Emily) – overall, I think you are on the right track. There are just some grammatical errors that can be easily fixed.