Praise: I like your idea of how a student should have study and review sessions arranged outside. I agree that students will learn better when they see another student at WCU studying outside instead of the 4 walls in the classroom.
Constructive: Your paper is good, but I believe you haven’t completed the assignment.
Percy: Your quotes support well with your paper.
Leah:
Praise: Your paper makes sense. It shows how students should learn outside of the teacher. Your topics make sense and it is well written.
Constructive: for your thesis, make sure you state “I believe good teaching at wcu can happen by a,b,c,d” Make sure you state your four topics in your last sentence.
Percy: You did a good job explaining the quotes meanings after you used them in the text. It allows us to understand.