(It wouldn’t let me leave a comment under Ava’s post so I made a new post)
Positive: Your quotes are spot on. They match your thesis perfectly and I think will be a big help while writing your paper.
Negative: Make sure to incorporate Freire’s writing in an effective way throughout the paper
Riley: You did a good job creating a thesis that shows your opinion clearly. You also connected it Percy as well as Friere perfectly. I like the fact that you strongly showed that a change at WCU needed to be made!
Gabby: I love that you chose to incorporate Freire in the beginning , I would have done the same thing. I would pick and chose to find the best fit of what makes sense and where it makes most sense to apply Freire, but good job also incorporating Percy.
