Meghan Kidd:
Praise: I like your stance on Gen Eds and how pointless they are
Use of Percy: This quote fits well with what you want to talk about regarding Gen Eds
Constructive: This doesn’t really say what you’re going to be writing about in your paper, elaborate more on what you want to write about
Olivia Vearling:
Praise: I think this is a good idea because you are not just focusing on the school work but are also learning just life experience.
Use of Percy: No use of Percy
Constructive: I don’ think that this is enough, just doing tutoring is not enough to transform learning at WCU.