Positive: Great use of Percy and quotes.
Negative: In thesis only thing I might change is make sure say your something like “in order to to have an effective way of learning outside a classroom setting educators should encourage and give opportunities for students to ( four ideas)
Riley: I like the way you explained your thesis more thoroughly this time and how your quotes match with your ideas throughout the paper.
Gabby: Great use of using both Freire and Percy in your essay it was purposeful and supported your ideas in your paper very well. Your Percy quotes you expand on very well after relating it to your idea.
