Praise: Your essay is relatable and clear to understand. Taking only Major courses would force students to miss out on necessary skills learned from those courses such as math and English. You may not require math for you field of interest but being good with numbers helps you out in numerous ways in your life.
Constructive: Adding more descriptive words would give your essay a better flow. A lot of similar pronouns are used and it can be repetitive at times.
Percy: The Quote talking about a “genuine experience” made a nice connection to your argument.
