amanda
Praise: I like your idea and the concept of how a person should get out of their field major and have hands on experience to achieve true learning.
Constrictive: I think you should elaborate more on the quotes and check your grammar.
Use of Percy: Your quotes back up well with your body paragraphs
Leah
Praise: Using the criminal justice class for your example really allows for everything to come together. It gives a good understanding of how WCU can change the problem in the education system.
Constructive: In your thesis, make sure you specifically state your four points of change from the essay.
Percy: When you quote, make sure you quote”…” (Freire 4). The quotes you use are good and make sense to your topic.
