Makayla, Maura, Gwen
Praise- off to a good start, you have goos examples throughout your essay Constructive- maybe give an example or two on how classes could benefit from a real experience
Percy- quotes are good they fit well in your essay and with your topic.
Sabrina Lindley
praise- you have a really good opening paragraph and a very well thought out essay
constructive- words are a little repetitive throughout the essay
Percy- all of your quotes are really good and fit well with all of your examples
