You did a really good job with your transitions and the thesis. You let the audience know exactly what was next paragraph was going to be about. Add a little more detail for you body paragraph and you’ll be good. Overall great job!
WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream
You did a really good job with your transitions and the thesis. You let the audience know exactly what was next paragraph was going to be about. Add a little more detail for you body paragraph and you’ll be good. Overall great job!