Praise: Good job introducing both Percy and Freire in the opening paragraph.
Constructive: watch your tenses and make sure you don’t switch it up
Use of Percy: good quote but you don’t need to introduce his writing again
WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream
Praise: Good job introducing both Percy and Freire in the opening paragraph.
Constructive: watch your tenses and make sure you don’t switch it up
Use of Percy: good quote but you don’t need to introduce his writing again