Team: Seamus, David,Haley
David
Praise: your ideas for labs and discussion groups are very good examples for teaching without teaching.
Constructive: Your body paragraphs reflect into your thesis making your paper strong.
Percy: your quotes on Percy connect your topic with your paper perfectly.
Seamus Corkery
Praise: I like how your first sentence in the intro paragraph references Percy and Freire
Constructive: I feel that you should maybe consider taking out the field trip point due to the fact that they would likely still be pointing things out and teaching during the field trip
Percy: Good quote in first solution of your essay.
Praise: I like the examples you chose for your thesis and they reflect well in your body paragraphs.
Constructive: I think your analysis of Percy and Freire quotes in your body paragraphs are very good.
Percy: I like the quote you used for your paragraph on mirrored learning. It supports your idea well.
