Praise: Your over all essay so far is very well versed, as well as you make great connections to both Freire as well as Percy. You have a strong thesis that is backed up entirely by your body paragraphs.
Constructive: The only thing I really noticed while reading your essay was that you just need to double check the spelling and grammar throughout the paper to receive your best grade.
Percy: Like I said before, I believe that you have strong Percy quotes and it is well backed by Freire as well. Both would more than likely support your opinion and claims.
