Amanda and Leah
Amanda’s:
Praise: I agree with your thesis on how spending major outside your classes can explore new ideas and adventures.
Constructive: Exploring and challenging yourself is good but wouldn’t that be just wasting a student’s path to their own major.
Use of Percy: You have strong supporting ideas and it goes well with your thesis.
Leah:
Praise: I like that your thesis talks about people taking different classes and opening their understanding of different classes.
Constructive: Be more specific when talking about your examples of how students are challenged, like give examples of how they are challenged in these different classes.
Percy: Your quotes make sense. Taking classes a student is not used to does allow for them to understand how to study because that is what happened to me.
