Team Jason Riberio and David Heffron
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1j1L4DENX_Fl0MmtePP6AR8XYaMdg1Ob9ecbXimHNpd4/edit?usp=sharing
Project #2 Proposal
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WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream
Team Jason Riberio and David Heffron
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1j1L4DENX_Fl0MmtePP6AR8XYaMdg1Ob9ecbXimHNpd4/edit?usp=sharing
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Praise: Your second quote is very strong and backs up your thesis well. If you use the quote correctly it could be the part of your essay that pulls everything together.
Constructive: Your first sub-point is very broad which will make finding 2 more sub-points very difficult.
Percy: Your thesis can be easily supported by the quotes you have chose. You found 2 very good quotes from Percy and can utilize them very well in the essay to support your thesis.