Dana Roeder
Percy: I like how your connection from Percy, are very well introduce to your paragraphs.
Constructive: You should develop your thesis and try to look for other ideas besides of focusing more of how school helps to students. I think that there’s other ways in the exterior that could be good using for this examples, try to connect those…
Praise: I like the Idea of study abroad, I think that goes perfectly with Percy’s ideas and he refers to.
